Tuesday, May 15, 2007

Ferrum

In the sweet embrace of darkness
I hide and cry-----

Miles of endless cul-de-sacs and
steet signs-----

I don't know how long I have
been walking-----

Down this road of meandering
woes of wishful thinking----

---------Think Think Think

That's all I knew then,
but what I don't now-----

Now I know------ Finally
Of course---
Yes.....
Sure.....

There are those for those
Those are those for there

There are people who share
There are people who care

Now I know------ Finally
Of course---
Yes.....
Sure.....

There is always a reason
why a person
cries----

We
may
never
know
what----

Niobe is the only person in the
world that cries for all eternity--------------

Let the cold arms
of darkness clasp you----

Swim into that ocean of
misery you have so
created perfectly-----------

Think Think Think

No person is one person
in this world--------

No one is special----

No one is just one----

We all have our haves
and we all know each knows-------

Cry and dawdle at your own pace---
Waste your sands---
Its in your hands---

I've grown up now

I found new lands.................

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Well, I'm not really good at poems, but let me give you the initial feeling I got.

in the beginning, the speaker was a little lost, like in a wilderment, an endless searching for himself.

in the middle, there was some sort of shift from the "ferrum" to a more brighter place.

the ending line was beautiful. it feels like some sort of rebirth.

(gyaaah. sorry. chaka! ahaha~)

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